first scene edits

From this first edit we noticed some issues with it for example:

• At the start of the shot after you zoom out you see the girl strapped up, however as it goes to a full shot of the girl sat on the chair, you can see that we have cut off the top of her head.
• Throughout the entire seen we have tried to build the tension by making sure the mans identity is not revealed yet after about 15 seconds he is identified- which defeats the object of trying to make him mysterious/ unidentified.
• When the girl is sat on the chair she is not awoken by the man entiring and the sound of the door yet as soon as the lights come on she is awake, this is unrealistic.

From these problems we have identified we will try and improve our next cut: